a new poem of mine called " god complex "
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i was sitting in my room
when the god complex kicked in
ranting to my friends
bout all I have with him
then he left and I oh so miss him
so I gatta get him back but I cant miss this.
my rooms filled with glitter and tears on the floor
your clothes fill my space, oh what a bore
you make me wanna yawn everytime I see round
so I gatta make it quick but I wanna make it last.
you say you wanna leave but I say no more
your stuck here with me so just ignore the girl
who, you knew before.. becouses shes dead
and never coming back, oh never coming back.

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a new poem of mine called " god complex " 
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i was sitting in my room 
when the god complex kicked in
ranting to my friends
bout all I have with him
then he left and I oh so miss him
so I gatta get him back but I cant miss this.
my rooms filled with glitter and tears on the floor
your clothes fill my space, oh what a bore
you make me wanna yawn everytime I see round
so I gatta make it quick but I wanna make it last.
you say you wanna leave but I say no more
your stuck here with me so just ignore the girl
who, you knew before.. becouses shes dead
and never coming back, oh never coming back.

theydontknowally · Answer

this is very good, but the ending left me speechless lmaoo. I love it doee

jinxthelovely · Answer

@theydontknowally wrote:

this is very good, but the ending left me speechless lmaoo. I love it doee

ah.. thank you <3.. i don't like it as much as I thought I would but..yeah

DmitriVolkov · Answer

Lovely. This gives me the urge to make my own.

jinxthelovely · Answer

@dmitrivolkov wrote:

Lovely. This gives me the urge to make my own.

oh? i encurege it <3

theydontknowally · Answer

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@theydontknowally wrote:

this is very good, but the ending left me speechless lmaoo. I love it doee

ah.. thank you <3.. i don't like it as much as I thought I would but..yeah

your welcomee, dont doubt your work, trust its good.

jinxthelovely · Answer

@theydontknowally wrote:

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@theydontknowally wrote:

this is very good, but the ending left me speechless lmaoo. I love it doee

ah.. thank you <3.. i don't like it as much as I thought I would but..yeah

your welcomee, dont doubt your work, trust its good.

thank you so much

SaltySuga · Answer

Ending caught me off guard