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I made a poem rate it


Thought we were tight, like stars in the night,
But shadows crept in, now nothing feels right.
Smiles turned to daggers, whispers in the dark,
You played the role, but I've lost the spark.
Fake love, like a mask you wear,
Backstabbers lurking, they don’t really care.
Thought we had forever, but it’s just a game,
Now I see the truth, I won't play your shame.
Promises shattered, like glass on the floor,
You danced on my heart, but I’m closing the door.
Trust was a treasure, now it’s lost in the past,
I’ll rise from the ashes, I’m free at last.
Fake love, like a mask you wear,
Backstabbers lurking, they don’t really care.
Thought we had forever, but it’s just a game,
Now I see the truth, I won't play your shame.
So here's to the lessons, the pain and the lies,
I’m stronger without you, watch me rise.
No more fake smiles, I’m cutting you loose,
Found my own light, that’s my true excuse.
Fake love, like a mask you wear,
Backstabbers lurking, they don’t really care.
Thought we had forever, but it’s just a game,
Now I see the truth, I won't play your shame.
So goodbye to the fakes, I’m reclaiming my heart,
From the ashes of trust, I’ll make a new start.

Answer 1

@laylalyssa

Answer 2

aww this is good I love this

Answer 3

Very interesting abbylnn it is indeed quite intriguing