Question

I just wrote a poem, any honest feedback is appreciated. Poem is posted below:

Friends, they always make me feel loved
Friends, even in the darkest of times, bring joy
Friends, they give a reason to keep living and not feel shoved
Friends, they are there even when I feel no joy.

Oh, even on restless nights, there is light at the end of the tunnel
Oh, even on restless nights, like the sun, I keep on being alive
Oh, even on restless nights, there is nothing as bad as a funnel
Oh, even on restless nights, the thought of friends makes me strive.

Even when all else fails, I don’t want to give up
Even when heartbreak consumes me like a lion, I find reasons
Even when everything seems like nothing but a dark tunnel, I move on with a cup
Even when everything falls apart, the thought of seeing friends brings joy without seasons.

Answer 1

U must gave really Gud friends lol

it's Gud an I think u should keep writing !!!!

Answer 2

Love ittt