I just wrote a poem, any honest feedback is appreciated. Poem is posted below: Friends, they always make me feel loved Friends, even in the darkest of times, bring joy Friends, they give a reason to keep living and not feel shoved Friends, they are there even when I feel no joy. Oh, even on restless nights, there is light at the end of the tunnel Oh, even on restless nights, like the sun, I keep on being alive Oh, even on restless nights, there is nothing as bad as a funnel Oh, even on restless nights, the thought of friends makes me strive. Even when all else fails, I don’t want to give up Even when heartbreak consumes me like a lion, I find reasons Even when everything seems like nothing but a dark tunnel, I move on with a cup Even when everything falls apart, the thought of seeing friends brings joy without seasons.
U must gave really Gud friends lol it's Gud an I think u should keep writing !!!!
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