A little poem I wrote rate it
In shadows deep, a friendship bloomed,
With whispered secrets, hearts entombed,
But trust was shattered, lies unfurled,
As you turned away from this broken world.

My ex best friend, once closest kin,
Now a stranger, a foe within,
Betrayal like a venomous sting,
Leaving wounds that never stop the ache and sting.

And then there was you, my heart's desire,
Lit a flame, set my soul on fire,
But your love was just a fleeting rush,
Leaving me abandoned in the dust.

So I stand alone, with scars to bear,
From two who once claimed to deeply care,
But from the ashes, I will rise anew,
Stronger, wiser, with lessons learned true.

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A little poem I wrote rate it 
In shadows deep, a friendship bloomed,
With whispered secrets, hearts entombed,
But trust was shattered, lies unfurled,
As you turned away from this broken world.

My ex best friend, once closest kin,
Now a stranger, a foe within,
Betrayal like a venomous sting,
Leaving wounds that never stop the ache and sting.

And then there was you, my heart's desire,
Lit a flame, set my soul on fire,
But your love was just a fleeting rush,
Leaving me abandoned in the dust.

So I stand alone, with scars to bear,
From two who once claimed to deeply care,
But from the ashes, I will rise anew,
Stronger, wiser, with lessons learned true.

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

that a pretty good poem, better than anything I could write....

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@knoxxyboy wrote:

that a pretty good poem, better than anything I could write....

Thank you

kristen000021 · Answer

This is good writing. You are creative. Its deep tho🙏 Nice job abby

JoshSimmons999 · Answer

Really Proud of you for what your doing with everything you do, you got this keep ya head up sis

XxXGhostXxX · Answer

trash stop writting stuff

SaltySuga · Answer

Is this ai

Elysium · Answer

@xxxghostxxx wrote:

trash stop writting stuff

You're trash buddy. You're a damn loser and it's a shock to me that you can even pull anybody online. You're pisśed off because your ex didn't do your job for you because you're some soyboy with no balls and can't act like a man to save your life. Get off her posts and quit talking to Abby and go fuçk yourself because nobody else is going to. Your name is "ghost" so do your job and disappear motherfuçker.

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

damn...

XxXGhostXxX · Answer

@elysium wrote:

@xxxghostxxx wrote:

trash stop writting stuff

You're trash buddy. You're a damn loser and it's a shock to me that you can even pull anybody online. You're pisśed off because your ex didn't do your job for you because you're some soyboy with no balls and can't act like a man to save your life. Get off her posts and quit talking to Abby and go fuçk yourself because nobody else is going to. Your name is "ghost" so do your job and disappear motherfuçker.

ur a loser bc ur da one responding like she cant sum herself n u never seen me u a hoe ur mom a hoe ur dad left ur dumbahh idk tf ur talking to me go get a life

Elysium · Answer

What the hell was that? Did a rat just run over your keyboard? I haven't seen gibberish that bad since your last Tinder bio homie.

theydontknowmelly · Answer

this is a good poem, and i think you should do more of these

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@elysium wrote:

@xxxghostxxx wrote:

trash stop writting stuff

You're trash buddy. You're a damn loser and it's a shock to me that you can even pull anybody online. You're pisśed off because your ex didn't do your job for you because you're some soyboy with no balls and can't act like a man to save your life. Get off her posts and quit talking to Abby and go fuçk yourself because nobody else is going to. Your name is "ghost" so do your job and disappear motherfuçker.

Thanks ml

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@theydontknowmelly wrote:

this is a good poem, and i think you should do more of these

Thanks

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@saltysuga wrote:

Is this ai

No 👎🏽😔

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@kristen000021 wrote:

This is good writing. You are creative. Its deep tho🙏 Nice job abby

Thanks kriss

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@joshsimmons999 wrote:

Really Proud of you for what your doing with everything you do, you got this keep ya head up sis

Thanks big brotha ily.

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@knoxxyboy wrote:

that a pretty good poem, better than anything I could write....

Thanks.

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

@elysium wrote:

@xxxghostxxx wrote:

trash stop writting stuff

You're trash buddy. You're a damn loser and it's a shock to me that you can even pull anybody online. You're pisśed off because your ex didn't do your job for you because you're some soyboy with no balls and can't act like a man to save your life. Get off her posts and quit talking to Abby and go fuçk yourself because nobody else is going to. Your name is "ghost" so do your job and disappear motherfuçker.

Thanks ml

I js realized who this was ty pretty boy 🤩🤓☝🏽

Elysium · Answer

@xxxghostxxx I know you're trying to block me so I don't kick your narrow asş even more than I already have, but you can't block me on posts. Firstly, whatever you said in my DM doesn't even make any sense "smoking deads" yeah, you seem like the kind of faggoţ to wanna be in a gang and pretend you can do something in-person other than wash dishes for your mom. Take your narrow asş and run in front of a car, nobody'd even know you're gone, they'd just be missing the dish kid. You're a pusşy bro, you have to tell your ex to kill herself because you can't even hold the relationship.

Try it on me bro, you think you're something? Come get me bro, I'll drop you and whatever friends you got. Bring it the fuçk on.

XxXGhostXxX · Answer

@elysium wrote:

@xxxghostxxx I know you're trying to block me so I don't kick your narrow asş even more than I already have, but you can't block me on posts. Firstly, whatever you said in my DM doesn't even make any sense "smoking deads" yeah, you seem like the kind of faggoţ to wanna be in a gang and pretend you can do something in-person other than wash dishes for your mom. Take your narrow asş and run in front of a car, nobody'd even know you're gone, they'd just be missing the dish kid. You're a pusşy bro, you have to tell your ex to kill herself because you can't even hold the relationship. Try it on me bro, you think you're something? Come get me bro, I'll drop you and whatever friends you got. Bring it the fuçk on.

Elysium · Answer

Thank you, we can see it.