Question

what u guys think of it

In the gentle warmth of morning light,
I find his laughter, pure delight.
With every glance, a spark ignites,
A dance of souls, our hearts take flight.

His voice, a melody soft and sweet,
In crowded spaces, he feels like home,
A steady hand, a heartbeat’s beat,
In his embrace, I’m never alone.

Through every challenge, side by side,
We weather storms, we turn the tide.
In moments shared, both fierce and bright,
I love him deeply, with all my might.

His kindness wraps like a tender breeze,
A rare connection that puts me at ease.
With every whispered promise made,
Love grows stronger, never to fade.

In laughter and tears, in dreams we weave,
In all that we are, I choose to believe.
To love him is to cherish the day,
In every heartbeat, I find my way.

Answer 1

I really like the way that you've structured this poem and I think that you've got some really good rhymes in there