poem by me- dad
hey dad, mom said I look like you,
hey dad, where are you?,
hey dad, do you know what I'm going through?,
hey dad, mom said we're better off without you,
hey dad, mom says I'm just like you,
is that true? is angry my every mood?
hey dad, I'm just like you.

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poem by me- dad
hey dad, mom said I look like you,
hey dad, where are you?,
hey dad, do you know what I'm going through?,
hey dad, mom said we're better off without you, 
hey dad, mom says I'm just like you,
is that true? is angry my every mood? 
hey dad, I'm just like you.

here4s · Answer

thanks kris.

ykbatman · Answer

Very well written and easy to relate with, overall just a good poem, good job.

Nitrox · Answer

real except im awesome but anyways this is too generic as it’s too repetitive for every line, 7 invader zim plushies/2 caramel apples

here4s · Answer

@nitrox wrote:

real except im awesome but anyways this is too generic as it’s too repetitive for every line, 7 invader zim plushies/2 caramel apples

@nitrox wrote:

real except im awesome but anyways this is too generic as it’s too repetitive for every line, 7 invader zim plushies/2 caramel apples

ok bruh