Question

I need you

I need you.
Not in the way
A child needs a toy,
A dog needs a bone,
Or a person needs a phone.

But in the way
The ocean needs salt,
A flower needs water,
A heart needs blood.

I need you to survive.
You are my everything. <3

Answer 1

Is this good enough for sm1 or should i add more

Answer 2

This is cute. I think its good. it just depends on you if this is how/ and all you feel of this person.

Answer 3

Theres more, i jus dont know how to put it in words

Answer 4

You could add a bit more if you want, but this is fantastic as is.

Answer 5

you don't have to come up with the words right away either, these things take time sometimes... while ur feelings grow stronger you'll prob be able to put it into words

Answer 6

this persons lucky. I love what you did in the poem to.

Answer 7

this is good, i like it. you dont have to add more right away like the others said. it js depends on how you feel bout this person. you did great

Answer 8

this is wonderful