Question

this good for a first song
We met in the night, but now it’s so cold
You held me close, but now you let go
I never thought you’d be the one to leave
But I guess love’s never as it seems
I feel your touch, but it’s slipping away
Now I’m just counting all the days
You said I’d be fine, but you never knew
That all I ever wanted was you

And every night, I replay our song
The way we danced, but it feels all wrong
I thought we had it, but you pulled away
Now I’m stuck here with the words you couldn’t say

I still feel you in the air
But you’re gone, it’s so unfair
I loved you, yeah, you know it’s true
But now I’m just a shadow of you
I keep dancing, but it don’t feel right
You left me in the dark, no light
I held on, but you slipped through
Now I’m just a shadow of you

Answer 1

i think the lyrics are kinda good, but its pretty short. It dependa on how the beat goes ig

Answer 2

mm, the song is decent. maybe add more rhythm and add more lyrics to it. other than that you did well.

Answer 3

the lyrics cool just try to rhyme more and get ya rythym right

Answer 4

The flow needs a bit more work but its not bad