Grammar check?
Once, there was a girl named Alaida. She was a small-town girl with big dreams of becoming a famous horse rider. Her trusty steed's name was Alibi. Alaida had been training Alibi ever since she was a foul. She wanted to travel the world and show Alibi’s skills and maintained coat. Alaida's parents didn't believe their daughter's dream would come true, but they were still very supportive.

Alaida came to her parents one day and said “Mom, Dad, there are horse tryouts coming up on Saturday. Am I able to go?”.

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Grammar check?
Once, there was a girl named Alaida. She was a small-town girl with big dreams of becoming a famous horse rider. Her trusty steed's name was Alibi. Alaida had been training Alibi ever since she was a foul. She wanted to travel the world and show Alibi’s skills and maintained coat. Alaida's parents didn't believe their daughter's dream would come true, but they were still very supportive.

Alaida came to her parents one day and said “Mom, Dad, there are horse tryouts coming up on Saturday. Am I able to go?”.

danielfootball123 · Answer

Once, there was a girl named Alaida. She was a small-town girl who dreamed of becoming a famous horse rider. Her trusty steed's name was Alibi. Alaida had been training Alibi ever since she was a foul. She wanted to travel the world and show Alibi’s skills and maintain her coat. Alaida's parents didn't believe their daughter's dream would come true, but they were still very supportive. Alaida came to her parents one day and said “Mom, Dad, horse tryouts are coming up on Saturday. Am I able to go?”.

This is a better version because it's more "efficient"

danielfootball123 · Answer

@sobitter does that work?

sobitter · Answer

@danielfootball123 wrote:

@sobitter does that work?

yes thank you

danielfootball123 · Answer

@sobitter wrote:

@danielfootball123 wrote:

@sobitter does that work?

yes thank you

No problem!