Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
my heat is dead
because of you.
thought my life had room for 2
but there was never a me n you.
Through the sky,
to the sun,
our journey was never fun.

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ptttttt · Answer

6 7

BlkOps77 · Answer

no real comment then no comment

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

That's actually pretty good. My second favorite poem!

BlkOps77 · Answer

@sstdogrednek wrote:

That's actually pretty good. My second favorite poem!

thanks...

scarlettmiris · Answer

It's a short but good poem, relatable too.

BlkOps77 · Answer

@scarlettmiris wrote:

It's a short but good poem, relatable too.

thats why i wrote it, these feelings jus recently happened

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

It happens to the best of us.

BlkOps77 · Answer

@sstdogrednek wrote:

It happens to the best of us.

why give my all if all they gon do is hurt me

SaltySuga · Answer

Wow this is awesome

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

Reserve your self for someone worth loving.

BlkOps77 · Answer

@sstdogrednek wrote:

Reserve your self for someone worth loving.

i thought i found tha sm1

BlkOps77 · Answer

@lenkkjkjk wrote:

like 6 7

no real comment then no comment

theydontknowmelly · Answer

ouh, this is the most short poem ive seen 🗿. its good n sad, i dont relate to it though but i get the feeling.

scarlettmiris · Answer

@blkops77 wrote:

@sstdogrednek wrote:

It happens to the best of us.

why give my all if all they gon do is hurt me

True, true. The best thing to do Is move on though, as slow as a process that might be. I hope you feel better soon.

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

Then Obviously you haven't lived life yet lol

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

Talking to thedontknwomelly

Lenkkjkjk · Answer

the poem is very nice might need to work on delivery though

theydontknowmelly · Answer

@sstdogrednek wrote:

Talking to thedontknwomelly

wym i havent lived life yet... im literally living it right now. 🗿

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

"need to work on delivery" ???

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

@theydontknowmelly wrote:

@sstdogrednek wrote:

Talking to thedontknwomelly

wym i havent lived life yet... im literally living it right now. 🗿

It's a figurative of speech.

thereneelg · Answer

I hope you're okay and get to feel better. This is pretty relatable and i'm sorry for everyone that goes through this. You aren't alone. (Sorry I don't Know if this is based on your feelings but if it is this is for you)

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

I hope everything is all well too!

iluvpanda · Answer

honestly, I rlly felt this. i'd give it a solid 8/10, it has a great message. but i think it ended a bit too quickly. I think it wud've been better with a few more sentences to wrap it up more smoothly.

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

Oh for sho!

SsTDOGRednek · Answer

Btw you said my heat is dead. Not My heart is dead. (Unless that's what you meant to say.)