Is this a good poem for an english assignment? I wrote it about someone a weeks ago.

A Whisper of Words

In midnight's glow, I wait in vain,
For love's sweet spark, a warm refrain.
Your texts are crisp, like winter's air,
A silence speaks; do you not care?

With heart aflame, my patience wane,
In every word, I seek your pain.
Yet in the hush of cold reply,
I find the echoes of goodbye.

Question

Is this a good poem for an english assignment? I wrote it about someone a weeks ago.

A Whisper of Words

In midnight's glow, I wait in vain,
For love's sweet spark, a warm refrain.
Your texts are crisp, like winter's air,
A silence speaks; do you not care?

With heart aflame, my patience wane,
In every word, I seek your pain.
Yet in the hush of cold reply,
I find the echoes of goodbye.

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

im not sure about a poem which speaks about Ghosting being used for an English assignment....

willowjade · Answer

it was supposed to be about heartbreak so I used that. we are reading a book and the guy just realized a girl didn't love him lol

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

I mean its a good poem, dotn get me wrong. I just don't feel like its appropriate for an English assignment

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

s\wait the assignment was supposed to be about heartbreak?

KnoxxyBoy · Answer

if thats the case the  I think its good

willowjade · Answer

@knoxxyboy wrote:

s\wait the assignment was supposed to be about heartbreak?

yeah

thereneelg · Answer

I think its really good for what the Message is about and how it involves the story!! I think this would be good to turn in. I really like your word choice too!!