I wrote my words, so clear and true,
Hoping you’d see them, hoping you’d view.
Two notes, no pressure, just a plea,
To know if you felt the same about me.

But here I stand, with heart in hand,
Waiting in silence, hoping you'd understand.
No words from you, no answer bright,
Just me, in the quiet, lost in the night.

I don’t need promises, I don’t need a show,
Just honesty—whatever it may be, let me know.
I won’t be angry, I won’t be sad,
I just need the truth, good or bad.

So if you care, or if you don’t,
Please let me know, and let me go.
For I won’t wait in the dark any longer,
I’ll find my peace, and grow stronger.

Question

I wrote my words, so clear and true,
Hoping you’d see them, hoping you’d view.
Two notes, no pressure, just a plea,
To know if you felt the same about me.

But here I stand, with heart in hand,
Waiting in silence, hoping you'd understand.
No words from you, no answer bright,
Just me, in the quiet, lost in the night.

I don’t need promises, I don’t need a show,
Just honesty—whatever it may be, let me know.
I won’t be angry, I won’t be sad,
I just need the truth, good or bad.

So if you care, or if you don’t,
Please let me know, and let me go.
For I won’t wait in the dark any longer,
I’ll find my peace, and grow stronger.

Thayes1287 · Answer

@djpup @critterproud @friendly @zachchevy @trippl333

SaltySuga · Answer

Oh this is cute

TomuraShigaraki · Answer

:thonk:

Thayes1287 · Answer

@tomurashigaraki wrote:

:thonk:

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jamesruth · Answer

I love the rhymes and words you used, it's good.

Thayes1287 · Answer

@jamesruth wrote:

I love the rhymes and words you used, it's good.

Thanks

mintyy · Answer

great use of words

Thayes1287 · Answer

@mintyy wrote:

great use of words

Thanks

MaxTon · Answer

Good work.

Thayes1287 · Answer

@maxton wrote:

Good work.

Thanks

scarlettmiris · Answer

It's really good.

Thayes1287 · Answer

@scarlettmiris wrote:

It's really good.

Thanks

ihy · Answer

Nice job, great use of wordage as well!

Thayes1287 · Answer

@ihy wrote:

Nice job, great use of wordage as well!

Thanks

ihy · Answer

@thayes1287 wrote:

@ihy wrote:

Nice job, great use of wordage as well!

Thanks

Anytime

mintyy · Answer

@thayes1287 wrote:

@mintyy wrote:

great use of words

Thanks

ofc

Breathless · Answer

nice poem! keep up the good work!