I need a name for it

The weight is heavy, I can't hold.
The sun is gone, it's always cold.
Inside my head, a silent scream,
Just endless gray, a broken dream.

I want to stop, just fade away,
No more to struggle, day by day.
Hope feels like a distant shore,
I can't reach it, anymore.

Just tired bones and weary soul,
Lost control, lost my whole goal.
Done with fighting, done with pain,
Just wanting peace, like gentle rain.

Question

I need a name for it

The weight is heavy, I can't hold.
The sun is gone, it's always cold.
Inside my head, a silent scream,
Just endless gray, a broken dream.

I want to stop, just fade away,
No more to struggle, day by day.
Hope feels like a distant shore,
I can't reach it, anymore.

Just tired bones and weary soul,
Lost control, lost my whole goal.
Done with fighting, done with pain,
Just wanting peace, like gentle rain.

minustempo · Answer

Going to sleep

laylasnii13 · Answer

@minustempo wrote:

Going to sleep

thx ill take it in consideration

XShawtyX · Answer

The Weight, A Broken Dream, Silent Scream

XShawtyX · Answer

And this is rlly good 💯

laylasnii13 · Answer

@xshawtyx wrote:

The Weight, A Broken Dream, Silent Scream

thx i will consider it

laylasnii13 · Answer

@xshawtyx wrote:

And this is rlly good 💯

thanks so much

XShawtyX · Answer

ofc

Sarahwells · Answer

awwwww I love t so muchhhhhhhh its so pretty and has a great rhythm

laylasnii13 · Answer

@sarahwells wrote:

awwwww I love t so muchhhhhhhh its so pretty and has a great rhythm

thank you so much

GRIZZLEY19 · Answer

I like it its very good 100/10 for me

scarlxrd0412 · Answer

I can relate to this 10/10

ihy · Answer

Nice Job 10/10

ihy · Answer

@xshawtyx wrote:

The Weight, A Broken Dream, Silent Scream

In my opinion, this is the best one

Twaylor · Answer

cringy :/

Chavo · Answer

the Guilt

Chavo · Answer

Silent cries

Chavo · Answer

Helpless

Chavo · Answer

@ihy wrote:

@xshawtyx wrote:

The Weight, A Broken Dream, Silent Scream

In my opinion, this is the best one

tbh, not tryna be rude but, maybe its the best one cause its the only ones x-x :)

Chavo · Answer

@xshawtyx wrote:

The Weight, A Broken Dream, Silent Scream

these are cool suggestions tho, great poem !!

Chavo · Answer

@chavo wrote:

@ihy wrote:

@xshawtyx wrote:

The Weight, A Broken Dream, Silent Scream

In my opinion, this is the best one

tbh, not tryna be rude but, maybe its the best one cause its the only ones x-x :)

Were the only ones* x-x, I gotta fix my grammar ;-;

ihy · Answer

@chavo wrote:

@ihy wrote:

@xshawtyx wrote:

The Weight, A Broken Dream, Silent Scream

In my opinion, this is the best one

tbh, not tryna be rude but, maybe its the best one cause its the only ones x-x :)

ok