poem i wrote about a guy i met.

Upon the screen, a light did gleam,
A stranger's face I saw Who quickly broke my awe.
He lived so far, across the land,
It felt like he was a thousand miles away,
But in my heart, he held my hand,
And brightened every day.
His words were kind, his spirit bright,
A gentle, loving soul,
He filled my world with pure delight,
And made me feel whole.
I fell in love, with every click,
With every message sent,
My heart beat fast, my senses quick,
On him my time was spent.
Some say it's foolish, love online,
A fantasy, untrue,
But in his heart, I saw a sign,
A love that felt brand new
He's more than just a boy I met,
Upon a digital screen,
He's my true love, I won't forget.

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poem i wrote about a guy i met.

Upon the screen, a light did gleam,
A stranger's face I saw Who quickly broke my awe. 
He lived so far, across the land,
 It felt like he was a thousand miles away,
But in my heart, he held my hand,
And brightened every day. 
His words were kind, his spirit bright,
A gentle, loving soul,
He filled my world with pure delight,
And made me feel whole. 
I fell in love, with every click,
With every message sent,
My heart beat fast, my senses quick,
On him my time was spent. 
Some say it's foolish, love online,
A fantasy, untrue,
But in his heart, I saw a sign,
A love that felt brand new
He's more than just a boy I met,
Upon a digital screen,
He's my true love, I won't forget.

willowjade · Answer

lmk what y'all think

GRIZZLEY19 · Answer

I like it 100/10

Cloud4444 · Answer

it's very nice ^^ u should share it with him^^

Mani4444 · Answer

its amazing

ihy · Answer

Good Job

willowjade · Answer

@grizzley19 wrote:

I like it 100/10

thank you

willowjade · Answer

@cloud4444 wrote:

it's very nice ^^ u should share it with him^^

I might

GRIZZLEY19 · Answer

@willowjade wrote:

@grizzley19 wrote:

I like it 100/10

thank you

Np

Mason1239 · Answer

3/10

Nitrox · Answer

why are the poems always about love or depressed stuff

GRIZZLEY19 · Answer

Because a lot of songs are poems so that's why it be sad love depression and killing