anyone wanna read my story I've been workin' on? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g_dUH2xxpzPUMiok1rBGTF1LFMU7rqV_7D_5IraZT_k/edit?tab=t.0

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MaxTon · Answer

I'll give it a read after the dishes and will give feed back

CrumbCrumbington · Answer

Too generic, think of better word usage, and use proper punctuation.

MaxTon · Answer

I like the short story it's simple yet cozy and gives me homey vibe. And the coffee shop part is so good. fun read : )

ihy · Answer

It's nice. I like the coffee shop part as well

Addif9911 · Answer

I love it it is great and very well written.

xXAikoXx · Answer

ill read it and give feedback