uuh I've been practicing just writing like poems and stuff uhh how did I do for these two?

"It was already too late for the messenger already began to rot, the words stuck and swollen unable to come out like barbed wire prickling at the skin never able to tear away at the hooks that digged into skin a delicate secret of a plea held too long till it suffocated in the very spare of thoughts who wished to hear."

"Beauty unparalleled like the infinite amount of knowledge of a universe for their kindness like a snowflake kiss a dancer wrapped in silk no words could touch them."

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uuh I've been practicing just writing like poems and stuff uhh how did I do for these two?

"It was already too late for the messenger already began to rot, the words stuck and swollen unable to come out like barbed wire prickling at the skin never able to tear away at the hooks that digged into skin a delicate secret of a plea held too long till it suffocated in the very spare of thoughts who wished to hear."

"Beauty unparalleled like the infinite amount of knowledge of a universe for their kindness like a snowflake kiss a dancer wrapped in silk no words could touch them."

Countless7Echos · Answer

I normally stick to art but now thinking I'm curious how cringe are my random ahh quotes wwww