Question

The Ghost (I did the story for a fan bc they asked on their message so now am seeing if u guys like it so this is second attempt)
I was driving to the woods to hunt for deer, I am usually the type to hunt or read or play games. But my mom told me to go hunt instead of sitting around. So I grabbed my bow and arrows and put them in the trunk and started my car, I took a turn and thought I saw someone. "hello?" I said. No answer. I got out of my car and went to the back of car and opened the trunk and grabbed my bow and arrows. I went down the trail and went into the deep woods and I saw the signs warning people not to go in there but I ignored them. "time to wait for deer I guess." I said to myself. I sat down and waited and that's when I heard a snap. I was alert and quick and I looked around with my arrow loaded in my bow and I saw her. A foggy figure of a girl. "hello are you lost?" I asked.She pointed at me and waved and I turned and looked behind me and when I looked back she was gone. I got my stuff and ran out of there, I was scared as heck. I saw her again and this time I saw her face. She had no eyes, Her mouth was twisted in a sewed up smile and she had long gnarly teeth. I was terrified, I screamed. She lunged at me and I fell back and shot my arrow and she scratch me at my throat and I was hurt, and bleeding badly and I tried to get up but my vision kept getting blurry and I collapsed and no one found me ever again. THE END.

Answer 1

I tried on this one

Answer 2

I honestly think its pretty good. I do feel like it would be better if it was longer.

Answer 3

Nice Job