Question

been bored out of my mind so I made a poem, hope you like it! also, if you have any tips, i'm open for improving.

I see your eyes
whenever I close mine
hear you laughter
whenever I think oh you

I try to stay away
but your gravity pulls me closer
and I cant help, but admire
you carry yourself
with such gentle grace

and the way I dream of you
your hand in mine
you laughing at me
and a smile on full display

my heart beats for you
but all I can do
is watch, and dream
because every time
my eyes close
I see yours starring back

Answer 1

This is so good!!!👍

Answer 2

thank you