Question

I wake to shadows, heavy days,
A world that feels like a worn-out play,
Each smile a mask, each laugh a sound,
Nothing real, just echoes around.

Time ticks slower, like a weary clock,
Moments drag on, each tick a mock.
Conversations fade, they lose their weight,
I wear the burden of unseen fate.

Friends drift apart, like leaves in the breeze,
Fights spark and flicker, never to cease.
Am I the reason for shifting tides?
In every glance, a truth that hides.

Tired of battles that wash me gray,
Life feels like a game that’s lost its way.
I fear the dawn brings a darker hue,
With each passing day, it’s hard to break through.

Hope feels distant, like stars in the night,
A flicker of warmth, but never quite right.
Will the loneliness ever subside?
Or grow even deeper, a relentless tide?

I breathe in the silence, the weight of despair,
Wonder if someone will notice I’m there.
As the world spins on, I cling to a dream,
That someday I’ll rise, and the struggle won’t seem.

Answer 1

How much more relatable and sad can poems get 😭😭😭

Answer 2

this 8/10 btw

Answer 3

I really like this poem keep going and continue making poem's you're really good at it!!