Question

My poem..

In your eyes, I find my skies,
A quiet world where nothing dies.
Your touch, a whisper, soft and true,
The heart I seek beats only for you.

Each word you speak, a gentle flame,
That lights the dark and calls my name.
In every laugh, in every sigh,
I feel the stars reflected in your eye.

Through storms and time, through night and day,
Your love’s a song that will not fade away.
And in this life, come joy or pain,
I’ll walk with you through sun and rain.

For in your arms, the world feels right,
A boundless day, a peaceful night.
No poet’s pen, no artist’s hue,
Could capture even a shade of you.

Answer 1

This is very lovely, like how you express yourself this way as well

Answer 2

I'll give it a 9.5/10

Answer 3

Ty ty, Ts only took me 5min at most to do

Answer 4

beautiful 9/10

Answer 5

Ty sm<3

Answer 6

It’s beautiful, keep up the work 🫰

Answer 7

I think it's some AI in it or sum cuz the commas and grammar and wording is just way too unhumanlike unless ur obsessed w english

Answer 8

this is my english grade. AP english.

Answer 9

Some people say my poems sound like they were written by AI.

Answer 10

But thank you for the feedback. I'll try agian!