Question

### Echoes of a Fading Light (Inspired by "Already Dead")

In the quiet of a dim-lit room,
Where shadows suffocate, hearts consume,
I feel the weight of every sigh,
Like Juice’s words, a whispered goodbye.

Alone, I drift in fragmented dreams,
Chasing visions torn at the seams,
“Already dead,” the echoes call,
In this haze, I stumble, fall.

A needle's kiss is all I crave,
An escape wrapped in a silent grave,
Fleeting moments of blissful pain,
In this desolation, I remain.

Each breath a phantom, heavy, worn,
As echoes of laughter feel so foreign,
“Can't feel my face,” a haunting refrain,
Lost in the shadows of endless pain.

Yet in the depths, a hollow plea,
“Reach for the light, you’re meant to be,”
But the darkness grips me like a vice,
Every flicker, a cruel disguise.

Though it hurts, I linger here,
Wrapped in shadows, bound by fear,
A fragile soul, too tired to fight,
Yearning for dawn, yet swallowed by night.

For every tear I’ve ever shed,
I drown in silence, living instead,
With every heartbeat, the dread runs deep,
In this solitude, I cannot sleep.

So I close my eyes, and let it fade,
Held by the whispers that time betrayed,
In this sorrow, I find my bed,
A flickering hope that feels already dead.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

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Answer 3

Thank you addi💕