ok SO. I posted a question with some song lyrics asking for opinions (speaking of, shout out to @forgetmylife, @iluvpanda, and LoverGIRL1, for sharing their opinions)

but now I'll post another song (unlike my other one I don't need help improving it lol)

{[WELCOME TO THE SEA BLUE SKIES}}

"
if your drowning
people tell u to swim
You know its not that easy
and I wish they did
as the air bubbles~
leave my mouth~
I watch them float to the sea blue skies
Cuz.......
WELCOME~ welcome~
to the sea blue skies
where~
birds~
love to take flight~
there's merchants
commoners
kings & queens
there's palaces, with hallways
Unlike you've ever seen"

( this is what I have so far lol)

Question

ok SO. I posted a question with some song lyrics asking for opinions (speaking of, shout out to @forgetmylife, @iluvpanda, and LoverGIRL1, for sharing their opinions)

but now I'll post another song (unlike my other one I don't need help improving it lol)

{[WELCOME TO THE SEA BLUE SKIES}}

"
if your drowning
people tell u to swim
You know its not that easy
and I wish they did
as the air bubbles~
leave my mouth~
I watch them float to the sea blue skies 
Cuz.......
WELCOME~ welcome~ 
to the sea blue skies
where~
birds~
love to take flight~
there's merchants
commoners
kings & queens
there's palaces, with hallways
Unlike you've ever seen"

( this is what I have so far lol)

Nina001 · Answer

this is real

addison123456 · Answer

Nah because why does this hit so hard. it feels like it could be a Juice Wrld remix. You should make a whole song for it.

zanesafoodie · Answer

@addison123456 wrote:

Nah because why does this hit so hard. it feels like it could be a Juice Wrld remix. You should make a whole song for it.

I KID. U. NOT. I have like 4 unfinished songs (including this one and the one I posted before) on my notes app XD

zanesafoodie · Answer

@addison123456 wrote:

Nah because why does this hit so hard. it feels like it could be a Juice Wrld remix. You should make a whole song for it.

also thanks lol

addison123456 · Answer

np and damn I like this song and u should post the others. this one feels like a Juice Wlr done like girl damn this ones good

zanesafoodie · Answer

@addison123456 wrote:

np and damn I like this song and u should post the others. this one feels like a Juice Wlr done like girl damn this ones good

when do u want me to post the others lol

zanesafoodie · Answer

@addison123456 wrote:

np and damn I like this song and u should post the others. this one feels like a Juice Wlr done like girl damn this ones good

I can do it now if u want?, the third one I wrote was about my pervert of an ex, its unfinished though lol but if you're still curious about it, I will gladly post it!

addison123456 · Answer

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@addison123456 wrote:

np and damn I like this song and u should post the others. this one feels like a Juice Wlr done like girl damn this ones good

I can do it now if u want?, the third one I wrote was about my pervert of an ex, its unfinished though lol but if you're still curious about it, I will gladly post it!

nah I loved what you made girly. it made me feel it in my heart and that doesn't happen so bravo.