ok SO. I posted a question with some song lyrics asking for opinions (speaking of, shout out to @forgetmylife, @iluvpanda, and LoverGIRL1, for sharing their opinions)
but now I'll post another song (unlike my other one I don't need help improving it lol)
{[WELCOME TO THE SEA BLUE SKIES}}
"
if your drowning
people tell u to swim
You know its not that easy
and I wish they did
as the air bubbles~
leave my mouth~
I watch them float to the sea blue skies
Cuz.......
WELCOME~ welcome~
to the sea blue skies
where~
birds~
love to take flight~
there's merchants
commoners
kings & queens
there's palaces, with hallways
Unlike you've ever seen"
( this is what I have so far lol)
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Nina001:
this is real
addison123456:
Nah because why does this hit so hard. it feels like it could be a Juice Wrld remix. You should make a whole song for it.
zanesafoodie:
@addison123456 wrote:
Nah because why does this hit so hard. it feels like it could be a Juice Wrld remix. You should make a whole song for it.
I KID. U. NOT. I have like 4 unfinished songs (including this one and the one I posted before) on my notes app XD
zanesafoodie:
@addison123456 wrote:
Nah because why does this hit so hard. it feels like it could be a Juice Wrld remix. You should make a whole song for it.
also thanks lol
addison123456:
np and damn I like this song and u should post the others. this one feels like a Juice Wlr done like girl damn this ones good
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zanesafoodie:
@addison123456 wrote:
np and damn I like this song and u should post the others. this one feels like a Juice Wlr done like girl damn this ones good