Question

Numb the Pain
Inspired by juice wrlds unreleased song numb the pain

In shadows deep, where echoes dwell,
A fragile heart crafted from hell,
Whispers of dreams now turned to dust,
Seeking solace, searching for trust.

Each tear that falls, a silent scream,
Chasing the ghosts of a shattered dream,
Moments lost in a haunting haze,
Wrapped in the warmth of forgotten days.

Fading smiles, like stars in the night,
Illusions of hope flicker, then fight,
To break the chains that bind the soul,
Yet every heart knows the toll.

Numb the pain with each passing tide,
Where broken dreams and memories hide,
A fleeting glimpse of a brighter dawn,
But the shadows linger, hope almost gone.

In a world where love feels so far,
I reach for your light, my guiding star,
But when the night falls, I’m left alone,
With wounds uncovered, the seeds not sown.

So here I stand, wrapped in despair,
Breathing the silence, gasping for air,
In chords of sorrow, I find my refrain,
This aching journey to numb the pain.

Answer 1

Sorry for using the word “hell” list your opinions, but please refrain from going off topic if it has nothing to do with feedback on the poem please don’t comment.