Question

Shadows of Tomorrow

This is based of juice wrld song perish

In the silence of night, I hear the calls,

Echoes of dreams in haunting halls.

Every sip of grief, I swallow whole,
Chasing the whispers that stir my soul.

Lost in a maze where the shadows play,

Fading memories struggle to stay.
Time slips away like sand in my hand,

A fleeting wish in a forgotten land.

I fight the demons, they dance with grace,

Each moment a battle, a broken embrace.

But I rise from the ashes, ignited by pain,

A heart full of sorrow, yet yearning for gain.

For every tear that falls, a story untold,

Of love and loss in this world so cold.
I hold on tight to what's left of me,
Dreaming of paths where my spirit is free.

In the twilight’s glow, I search for light,

A flicker of hope in the darkest night.
Though shadows may linger and cries might perish,

In the echoes of I’ll forever cherish

Answer 1

Let me know your thoughts.

Answer 2

yoo dis actually tuff

Answer 3

I feel the juice world style flow in it yk, maybe u could make it a bit more wordy to make each sentence of words to flow perfectly, I'd give this a 9/10 ong