I made a poem don't know what to call if yet if you can have any ideas y'all

She walks with quietness in her chest
a hollow where their voices stayed her mother's laugh her Grandma's hands no memories that aching fade

the world kept spinning when they left no pause no sign no gentle cue but she learned to breathe through broken days to live a missing what she knew

her friends fell off like Autumn leaves some drifted some just let her go she's still alone with heavy thoughts and nights that whispered she was low

yet somehow still she wakes each Dawn,she eats, she works, she dreams, she tries she carries grief like folded wings it hurts but still somehow she flies

and in her heart the one name stays warm a study light she doesn't flee one boy she loves a quiet hope a place where she can almost be

he doesn't fix the cracks inside,
he doesn't chase her pain away.
he simply sees her scarred and real,
and that is why she stays.

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I made a poem don't know what to call if yet if you can have any ideas y'all

She walks with quietness in her chest 
a hollow where their voices stayed her mother's laugh her Grandma's hands no memories that aching fade
 
the world kept spinning when they left no pause no sign no gentle cue but she learned to breathe through broken days to live a missing what she knew

her friends fell off like Autumn leaves some drifted some just let her go she's still alone with heavy thoughts and nights that whispered she was  low
 
yet somehow still she wakes each Dawn,she eats, she works, she dreams, she tries she carries grief like folded wings it hurts but still somehow she flies

and in her heart the one name stays warm a study light she doesn't flee one boy she loves a quiet hope a place where she can almost be

he doesn't fix the cracks inside,
he doesn't chase her pain away.
 he simply sees her scarred and real,
and that is why she stays.

SaltySuga · Answer

Ts not tuff

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@saltysuga wrote:

Ts not tuff

Don't care

SaltySuga · Answer

make it tuff

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

Bro I literally just posted it why are you hating already 🙄

SaltySuga · Answer

Who uses eye roll emoji in 2025

SwaggyMark · Answer

Tuff poem

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@swaggymark wrote:

Tuff poem

Ty marker ❤️

SaltySuga · Answer

@swaggymark wrote:

Tuff poem

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@saltysuga wrote:

Who uses eye roll emoji in 2025

Me of course

SaltySuga · Answer

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

Bro I literally just posted it why are you hating already 🙄

Me of course

replying too your own reply is a new level of self love

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@saltysuga wrote:

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

Bro I literally just posted it why are you hating already 🙄

Me of course

replying too your own reply is a new level of self love

It was an accident get off my post now .

SaltySuga · Answer

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

@saltysuga wrote:

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

Bro I literally just posted it why are you hating already 🙄

Me of course

replying too your own reply is a new level of self love

It was an accident get off my post now .

How about no

SaltySuga · Answer

Aha clock it

SaltySuga · Answer

I clock you

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

⏰

SaltySuga · Answer

tick tock chop chop

zionn · Answer

Soso tuff, nice job!

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@zionn wrote:

Soso tuff, nice job!

Thank youh.

zionn · Answer

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:

@zionn wrote:

Soso tuff, nice job!

Thank youh.

Ofc

forgetmylife · Answer

Wow Abby so much emotion within this. I love the poem a lot and I know who it’s meant for it immaculate Abby good job

uknownprttyfacekayla · Answer

@forgetmylife wrote:

Wow Abby so much emotion within this. I love the poem a lot and I know who it’s meant for it immaculate Abby good job

Thank you nas 🫶🏽

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