inspired by Juice WRLD's My Social Suicide

In the chaos of laughter, my heart feels the freeze,

A jester in the spotlight, yet begging for ease.

Faces surround me, but I still stand alone,

A castle of secrets, a heart turned to stone.

Each smile a façade, a brittle disguise,

As I drown in the silence, my spirit slowly dies.

The weight of the world bears down on my chest,

In this crowd of connections, I feel so distressed.

Tears fall like rain, unseen in the night,

Haunted by shadows, I’m losing my fight.

The whispers grow louder, “You’re not enough,”

A battle inside, and it’s painfully rough.

Chasing the daylight, but darkness holds tight,

Searching for solace in a long and cold night.

Yet in every fracture, there’s a glimmer of light,

A flicker of hope, ready to ignite.

So I pour out my heart, through verses and rhyme,

This pain is a chapter, not the end of my time.

In the depths of my sorrow, I'll rise and break free,

For even in darkness, there’s a part of me that can see me.

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inspired by Juice WRLD's My Social Suicide

In the chaos of laughter, my heart feels the freeze,

A jester in the spotlight, yet begging for ease.

Faces surround me, but I still stand alone,

A castle of secrets, a heart turned to stone.

Each smile a façade, a brittle disguise,

As I drown in the silence, my spirit slowly dies.

The weight of the world bears down on my chest,

In this crowd of connections, I feel so distressed.

Tears fall like rain, unseen in the night,

Haunted by shadows, I’m losing my fight.

The whispers grow louder, “You’re not enough,”

A battle inside, and it’s painfully rough.

Chasing the daylight, but darkness holds tight,

Searching for solace in a long and cold night.

Yet in every fracture, there’s a glimmer of light,

A flicker of hope, ready to ignite.

So I pour out my heart, through verses and rhyme,

This pain is a chapter, not the end of my time.

In the depths of my sorrow, I'll rise and break free,

For even in darkness, there’s a part of me that can see me.

forgetmylife · Answer

Feel free to comment let me know your feedback but please remain on topic.

adreonnaRaeee · Answer

omg excellent writing 🤌🤌

forgetmylife · Answer

@adreonnaraeee wrote:

omg excellent writing 🤌🤌

Thank you💞

Nina001 · Answer

I read this and forgot to reply this poem is so ugly good job bestie you ate this up

forgetmylife · Answer

@nina001 wrote:

I read this and forgot to reply this poem is so ugly good job bestie you ate this up

Confusion but thank you Nina 💞

Nina001 · Answer

@forgetmylife wrote:

@nina001 wrote:

I read this and forgot to reply this poem is so ugly good job bestie you ate this up

Confusion but thank you Nina 💞

LOL YW YW

zionn · Answer

Nice Job! I like it

forgetmylife · Answer

@zionn wrote:

Nice Job! I like it

Thanks you vro 🖤