In whispered sighs beneath the shattered glass,
Our love once gleamed, now dulled by time's cruel pass.
The threads we wove have frayed beneath regret,
A tapestry unraveling, sunken, set.

Eyes that once sparked with dreams now hold the rain,
Silent echoes haunt the corners of pain.
Promises broken like brittle autumn leaves,
Lingering warmth dissolves as heartache breathes.

Yet in this wreckage, love’s faint pulse remains—
A fragile glow amid the growing stains.

Question

In whispered sighs beneath the shattered glass,
Our love once gleamed, now dulled by time's cruel pass.
The threads we wove have frayed beneath regret,
A tapestry unraveling, sunken, set.

Eyes that once sparked with dreams now hold the rain,
Silent echoes haunt the corners of pain.
Promises broken like brittle autumn leaves,
Lingering warmth dissolves as heartache breathes.

Yet in this wreckage, love’s faint pulse remains—
A fragile glow amid the growing stains.

adreonnaRaeee · Answer

very nice, excellent work 👏

xjacob · Answer

Excellent work

seeker · Answer

yet in this wreckage, love's faint pulse remains ... 
beautifully said

xjacob · Answer

@seeker wrote:

yet in this wreckage, love's faint pulse remains ... beautifully said

I agree with you

DEC · Answer

Yes this is really good and nice job