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xcoledd1:

Does anybody think my presentation is good?

xcoledd1:

xcoledd1:

I need to have this a minimum of 3 minutes and a maximum of 5

Sleepyman:

yeah its great good job :)

xcoledd1:

@sleepyman wrote:
yeah its great good job :)
Thanks

XxXImHerXxX:

sorry but no

xcoledd1:

@xxximherxxx wrote:
sorry but no
It's okay

XxXImHerXxX:

Its just too much for me

xcoledd1:

@xxximherxxx wrote:
Its just too much for me
I understand, I just want everyone's opinion so I know if it is good, what do I need to do?

XxXImHerXxX:

Maybe something more simple use slidesgo for some easy and simple slides

xcoledd1:

@xxximherxxx wrote:
Maybe something more simple use slidesgo for some easy and simple slides
I got it, thank you

XxXImHerXxX:

mhm :)

xcoledd1:

Thank you by the way

XxXImHerXxX:

ofc I got you plus the slides you made makes you look like a 5 yo we don't want you to be bullied abt it so I'm trynna help you

SaltySuga:

No

thereneelg:

I agree with Im Her. I think its very nice, but there is ALOT going on on each slide. A presentation is supposed to be neat : ). I get it that you want silly pictures and stuff so here is what I do (though, I usually do it on presentations about schoolwork, not about myself but yk) : I make all the slides with Information Neat and presentable (EX: A Colour background and some nice font.), Then, At the END of the presentation (like your “any questions?” slide), You add all the silly photos. It makes sure so there isnt ALOT going on on one slide while also being silly. Goodluck with your presentation!!!

thereneelg:

Sorry I yapped alot. Holy yap.

ts:

Overall, I like the whole thing but it'd be a lot better if it was simplified a little more yk?

darkkk:

its trash ngl

ts:

@darkkk wrote:
its trash ngl
Bro didn't even look at it :/

darkkk:

why would i look at it

darkkk:

67

ts:

How did bro get a medal for calling it trash :sob:

mxddi3:

I think you have lotsss of info here. I’d recommend either removing the background of your slides or changing the color and font because it seems to blend in with the background a bit too much. Also, with there being lots of info, i’d take some words off the slide. So for example, if i was listing my favorite foods i’d add like 2-3 and then small photos of other foods. You can use your images as talking points. “Here is a photo of ____ which I also really enjoy.” Your presentation should be a guide. Look at it like this…you wrote an essay about yourself, and now you need to turn that essay into a presentation. The slides should not be filled with words from your essay. Just small keywords/phrases and maybe some small photos that match the slide topic. Good luck :)

Lillys2account:

Uhm...there was overall a lot going on in all of the slides. i think with you being almost an adult, it should be more professional, especially if it's for school. And you need to put into consideration that your phone number and persona email were in there aswell. And no one needs to know that stuff. We learned about being safe online years ago, if i were you i'd take that down, along with all of the personal photos, as well as all the little effects you have on your slides.....they're distracting. Please don't take this the wrong, take it as criticism for your own good..

DUXK:

uh fr not good no hate tho but um u gotta try next time fs for ur age u should atleast seem like yk what ur doing

Lillys2account:

@duxk wrote:
uh fr not good no hate tho but um u gotta try next time fs for ur age u should atleast seem like yk what ur doing
literally 😭

xcoledd1:

@duxk wrote:
uh fr not good no hate tho but um u gotta try next time fs for ur age u should atleast seem like yk what ur doing
I'm 19

Lillys2account:

@xcoledd1 wrote:
@duxk wrote:
uh fr not good no hate tho but um u gotta try next time fs for ur age u should atleast seem like yk what ur doing
I'm 19
then you gotta act like it babes..

xcoledd1:

@lillys2account wrote:
@xcoledd1 wrote:
@duxk wrote:
uh fr not good no hate tho but um u gotta try next time fs for ur age u should atleast seem like yk what ur doing
I'm 19
then you gotta act like it babes..
thank you for the advice, you're the best

x2:

It's pretty good overall

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