(I wouldn't exactly consider this a commission and yet I am so here we go,) this is a commission for SaltySuga, after making a post asking for themes, they responded with the idea of writing a song about losing someone loyal and its all your fault and that's exactly what I did, so here the beginning of it! ^^

it's called see you around

I'm sorry
please try your best to understand
your hand is not mine to hold
so I guess i'll see you around?
I know what I said
ruined everything i've ever known
you were my everything
I guess I'm nothing to you now
oh well i'll see you around
(oh~)
(ohhh~)
so I guess i'll see you around
(ohhh~)
(oh~)

I'm sorry for everything
and I miss everything we had
laying on your bed talking and laughing
even when your mom yelled at us to go to sleep
you were the moon to my starlight
haven't you ever seen a starless sky?
that's how I feel without you
but you cut it off
so I guess I'll see you

Question

(I wouldn't exactly consider this a commission and yet I am so here we go,) this is a commission for SaltySuga, after making a post asking for themes, they responded with the idea of writing a song about losing someone loyal and its all your fault and that's exactly what I did,  so here the beginning of it! ^^

it's called see you around

I'm sorry
please try your best to understand
your hand is not mine to hold
so I guess i'll see you around?
I know what I said
ruined everything i've ever known
you were my everything
I guess I'm nothing to you now
oh well i'll see you around
(oh~)
(ohhh~)
so I guess i'll see you around
(ohhh~) 
(oh~)

I'm sorry for everything
and I miss everything we had
laying on your bed talking and laughing
even when your mom yelled at us to go to sleep
you were the moon to my starlight
haven't you ever seen a starless sky?
that's how I feel without you
but you cut it off
so I guess I'll see you

Daze01 · Answer

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

tax · Answer

Nice job, very captivating and heartfelt lyrics!

zanesafoodie · Answer

@tax wrote:

Nice job, very captivating and heartfelt lyrics!

ty T^T

zanesafoodie · Answer

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

tax · Answer

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

Yeah no problem

Daze01 · Answer

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

ofccc bud <3

Daze01 · Answer

@tax wrote:

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

Yeah no problem

🤔🤔??

zanesafoodie · Answer

@daze01 wrote:

@tax wrote:

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

Yeah no problem

🤔🤔??

?????????

Daze01 · Answer

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

@tax wrote:

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

Yeah no problem

🤔🤔??

?????????

nvm..i was just wondering why he replied to a comment quoted to me lmao

zanesafoodie · Answer

@daze01 wrote:

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

@tax wrote:

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

Yeah no problem

🤔🤔??

?????????

nvm..i was just wondering why he replied to a comment quoted to me lmao

lmao ok

tax · Answer

@daze01 wrote:

@tax wrote:

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

Yeah no problem

🤔🤔??

OH MB

tax · Answer

@daze01 wrote:

@zanesafoodie wrote:

That's mb I didn't know I clicked on urs

@daze01 wrote:

@tax wrote:

@zanesafoodie wrote:

@daze01 wrote:

Zane the lyrics are really captivating has always "i'll see you around" is lwk relatable to few of us and i hope SaltySuga can feel better after reading the song you wrote. This song also reminds me of "Happier than Ever" (P.S i am not advertising or anything i'm just expressing how it reminds me of the song). AGAIN i need this song out there, trust me it'll be a banger with the right beats.

thanks ^^

Yeah no problem

🤔🤔??

?????????

nvm..i was just wondering why he replied to a comment quoted to me lmao

yhyhR · Answer

this is nice keep going !!