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cullenn:

Poem: Imagine Written by: Me<33 Imagine, your first relationship, your first experience, ruined. He held me close, too close for comfort. He held me tight, so tight I couldn't breathe. I begged him to stop, never did he listen. I was only good for one thing, one thing that I hated. He laughed when he hit me, how was it funny? Was it always a joke? It just now "hit me." When his hands were on me, it wasn't "that's so cute." More of a crime, Help. I'm a person, too. Was it control he wanted? Or simply my body. He never wanted me, only a body. "Only if you want to." but that was never really true, why wouldn't he stop? help, I'm so blue. Mr. Popular he was, so no one ever knew. How he touched me, when I didn't ask him to. My cries for help were turned into rumors. No one believed me, they never even tried. The week he left me, he found someone new. He treats her better, does she not complain? Imagine my first relationship, my first experience, ruined.

smiley7:

did dis rlly happen to u cullenn?

Chronic:

I know a lot of people that can relate to this poem right now and I love the way you organized it. I hope you feel seen and know your not alone.

cullenn:

@smiley7 wrote:
did dis rlly happen to u cullenn?
it did, but I'm not posting for comments on that, js my poem! writing is a great outlet for me

cullenn:

@chronic wrote:
I know a lot of people that can relate to this poem right now and I love the way you organized it. I hope you feel seen and know your not alone.
thank you sm

Bounty:

np

OnenOnlyy:

stalking lulz

smiley7:

huh

MaxTon:

Love your poem

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