hand prints
words unspoken

there's no love
you don't understand where those hands explored
the same person you all adored
as he took his "fair share"

you guys said there's nothing there
no thing to take
nothing to love

it couldn't have happened because there's nothing beautiful about me
I told you all what happened those nights
you guys looked me up and down in the eye
asked why I don't put up a fight

now I sit here every day
I lay where he took my soul away

no eating
no speaking
you all ignored me till I apologized and watched me as I cried

and in the end he won
thing i feared happened
you all left Me and took his side

true story abt my life experiences. What do you guys think this is about?

Question

hand prints
words unspoken

there's no love
you don't understand where those hands explored
the same person you all adored 
as he took his "fair share"

you guys said there's nothing there
no thing to take
nothing to love

it couldn't have happened because there's nothing beautiful about me
I told you all what happened those nights
you guys looked me up and down in the eye 
 asked why I don't put up a fight

now I sit here every day
I lay where he took my soul away

no eating 
no speaking 
you all ignored me till I apologized and watched me as I cried

and in the end he won
thing i feared happened
you all left Me and took his side

true story abt my life experiences. What do you guys think this is about?

Bounty · Answer

a bit of typos but this is still just a draft and quick write of what I really want to write.

DeadInsideX · Answer

a very deep and personal poem you have wrote there. it's a really amazing poem :3

Bounty · Answer

@deadinsidex wrote:

a very deep and personal poem you have wrote there. it's a really amazing poem :3

tysm any advice?

DeadInsideX · Answer

@bounty wrote:

@deadinsidex wrote:

a very deep and personal poem you have wrote there. it's a really amazing poem :3

tysm any advice?

yw and the only advice i can give you is life sucks and always will be. like ik that sounds like poor advice. but what do i know likeeee right like i am going thru my own stuff too so ik how you feel in this poem probably not similar stuff but it's still can be alot. butttt all i can say is your mind can be your greatest weakness meaning if you thinki about negative stuff that will be your outcome for your life. like idkkkk broooo. just never give up and you still can make things right in the outcome of life's uhhh BS Moments. so yeah

Bounty · Answer

@deadinsidex wrote:

@bounty wrote:

@deadinsidex wrote:

a very deep and personal poem you have wrote there. it's a really amazing poem :3

tysm any advice?

yw and the only advice i can give you is life sucks and always will be. like ik that sounds like poor advice. but what do i know likeeee right like i am going thru my own stuff too so ik how you feel in this poem probably not similar stuff but it's still can be alot. butttt all i can say is your mind can be your greatest weakness meaning if you thinki about negative stuff that will be your outcome for your life. like idkkkk broooo. just never give up and you still can make things right in the outcome of life's uhhh BS Moments. so yeah

so wisee

DeadInsideX · Answer

@bounty wrote:

@deadinsidex wrote:

@bounty wrote:

@deadinsidex wrote:

a very deep and personal poem you have wrote there. it's a really amazing poem :3

tysm any advice?

yw and the only advice i can give you is life sucks and always will be. like ik that sounds like poor advice. but what do i know likeeee right like i am going thru my own stuff too so ik how you feel in this poem probably not similar stuff but it's still can be alot. butttt all i can say is your mind can be your greatest weakness meaning if you thinki about negative stuff that will be your outcome for your life. like idkkkk broooo. just never give up and you still can make things right in the outcome of life's uhhh BS Moments. so yeah

so wisee

yeah i try