tear after tear, with my eyes still red
People are fake, just like him
Im sorry for Yelling, but i havent heard an apology from you either.
i miss you, i miss how we talked, played around, and etc.
we went from friends to strangers.
all in a matter of 3 minutes.

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tear after tear, with my eyes still red
People are fake, just like him
Im sorry for Yelling, but i havent heard an apology from you either.
i miss you, i miss how we talked, played around, and etc.
we went from friends to strangers. 
all in a matter of 3 minutes.

MaxTon · Answer

I don't think your poems exactly make sense to be completely honest, your verses are scrambled around and it's very confusing, thats my feed back, sounds like you had something than half way you switched it up and changed it to something diffrent

EdwinJsHispanic · Answer

ty but this is fully based on a true story or wtv, this is actually what happened.

DUXK · Answer

uhmm ur words are deep and hit hard lwk

Brooklynnp · Answer

yup ppl be fake fr

EdwinJsHispanic · Answer

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