Question

In shadows deep, where silence dwells,
A weary heart, in whispered spells,
The days bleed gray, the nights are long,
In tangled thoughts, I drift along.

Each passing moment, heavy like stone,
A hollow echo, I walk alone,
The colors fade, the laughter chills,
As numbness wraps what once had thrills.

Yet in the dusk, a flicker glows,
A fragile spark, the warmth it shows,
A fleeting smile, a gentle touch,
In this dark world, it means so much.

But in my fear, I sense the drift,
That tiny light, it feels a rift,
A thread so thin, it frays and tugs,
And with each breath, I feel it shrugs.

Oh solace found in eyes so bright,
Yet grasping hands can’t hold too tight,
I fight the pull of endless night,
While yearning for that guiding light.

So here I stand, lost yet awake,
In shadows thick, for love’s own sake,
I’ll cherish every fleeting gleam,
As hope slips soft, yet lingers dream.

Answer 1

This is actually so inspiring, I am working on my own poem as we speak, this gives me some motivation! Keep up the good work.

Answer 2

I love this poem, It's very unique and I can really relate to this poem myself. Amazing work keep it up!