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I don't Know who to hate. My best friend That I liked but I found out she already likes some boy named Christian. Or myself for believing that I can actually be loved by someone like her. or someone at all. I don't know who to trust. My mom that says I Can trust her without feeling like she'll just throw it away. Or my Dad That I wish I Can Trust him without being scared of him. Without being Fearful around him. without Hating him in the slightest way. I don't know whether I Have to many problems to deal with. Or Maybe I AM the problem and I just need to get rid of it.

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I don't Know who to hate. My best friend That I liked but I found out she already likes some boy named Christian. Or myself for believing that I can actually be loved by someone like her. or someone at all.  I don't know who to trust. My mom that says I Can trust her without feeling like she'll just throw it away. Or my Dad That I wish I Can Trust him without being scared of him. Without being Fearful around him. without Hating him in the slightest way. I don't know whether I Have to many problems to deal with. Or Maybe I AM the problem and I just need to get rid of it.

Bounty · Answer

mmmm well put this is very realistic and relatable good job  keep up the work and to top it off you should add some imagery into some of your writing.

laylasnii13 · Answer

Don't ever blame yourself and I'm sure you can be loved it takes time and the right person but Love this well put together!

Twaylor · Answer

amazing :>

Addif9911 · Answer

You got this Edwin, I believe in you! You can always talk to me. You did so good on this.

EdwinJsHispanic · Answer

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thereneelg · Answer

This is great, feels like you put a lot of feeling in it. Keep it up, bro!! Hope everything goes well.

CharChar55 · Answer

Woah, so powerful you brought me to tears I'm jk but really good writing

EdwinJsHispanic · Answer

thanks you guys