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hi um I don't know if this is the right section for this, but can someone go over my poem and tell me if its good enough to give my English professor for a poem practice assignment? if it isn't, can you give me feedback and tips on how to make it better? sorry it's a bit depressing


Sometimes I wish I could be a little caterpillar,
Waiting to grow wings to soar from the cocoon it created to feel safe.

I wish I was that caterpillar,
Eating leaves from sappy trees,
Living free from harm,
Not caring how much other creatures are such peeves,
making me weak in my knees

My head throbs,
Beating like a racing heart,
Waiting for other caterpillars to grow up from being such slobs.

Laziness engulfs me no matter how much I squirm,
my body writhing in such irritation,
My head ready to explode from its grave inflation.

That’s why i decide that now,

I have become,

That tiny, worthless, earthless and utterly useless caterpillar.