Question

I wrote something that I don't know if I want it as a poem or song, Please let me know on yours thoughts about it, I'm still doing this!

"Broken promises and bent lies, crossed your premises just to remember our love before it dies. I miss you but what can I do, I needed you most likely homework that was do. You left me when I was at my worst, and turned my attachment to you into a curse. One that couldn't be cured, and one I had endured" To Be Continued...

Answer 1

as I read it I think its more of a poem

Answer 2

poem for sure but one small note, you said "homework that is do" when it's supposed to be due.

Answer 3

yeah that's what I wrote but it autocorected into "do" instead of "due"

Answer 4

lwk tuff