Question

My poem

Answer 1

All of you is what I need
Together, we will succeed
I look forward to our next moment together
With you life cannot become any better

Answer 2

"With you life cannot become any better" seems a bit off to me. I get what you are trying it say but the way its written it's as if this person is stopping life from becoming better.

Answer 3

What do you mean by better? use something that flows with the sentance! by the way without not with you. :)

Answer 4

pretty good