How can I improve this sentence grammatically?
Humanity is good; we are a moral and kind people, and that is why we have survived.

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How can I improve this sentence grammatically?
Humanity is good;  we are a moral and kind people, and that is why we have survived.

anonymous · Answer

Humanity is good. We are kind people with morals; that's why we have survived.

anonymous · Answer

Just check if the sentence/s sounds right, and if the sentences are with sort of different ideas, or different phrases, break it down, remove it from your sentence, and make a new one.

Oh, and 'people' is plural. You don't need to put 'a' before it.

And 'moral' is a noun, not an adjective.

Hoped that helped. :)

anonymous · Answer

Try not to use the word "good", it doesn't sound very appealing.

anonymous · Answer

It's wordy.  Try this.  Is the main point why humanity survived or that humanity is good?  That is what you need to highlight in your sentences.  Also, from what perspective are you writing?  You start off by using the word humanity, which leads me to suspect a 3rd person perspective, but then you shift into a first person point of view with "we."  How about these as alternatives?  "Humanity's kindness and morality have enabled them to survive" or "We as human beings are moral and kind, which is why we have survived."