How can I make this sentence cleaner?

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smurfy14 · Answer

Edward goes back-and-forth between the descriptions of those in the grace of God and those who are out to emphasize how much happier the ones in the grace of God are.

anonymous · Answer

Don't jump from one idea to another.

anonymous · Answer

Edward goes back-and-forth between the descriptions of those in the grace of God;  those who are out to emphasize how much happier the ones in the grace of God are.  // I reccomend using adequate's advice...

smurfy14 · Answer

well i already know that I wanted you to rewrite it in a more clearer way.

anonymous · Answer

Edward alternates descriptions of two distinct groups: those who are in God's grace; and those who explain how much happier those in God's grace are, relative to others.