Question

How can I make this sentence cleaner?

Answer 1

Edward goes back-and-forth between the descriptions of those in the grace of God and those who are out to emphasize how much happier the ones in the grace of God are.

Answer 2

Don't jump from one idea to another.

Answer 3

Edward goes back-and-forth between the descriptions of those in the grace of God; those who are out to emphasize how much happier the ones in the grace of God are. // I reccomend using adequate's advice...

Answer 4

well i already know that I wanted you to rewrite it in a more clearer way.

Answer 5

Edward alternates descriptions of two distinct groups: those who are in God's grace; and those who explain how much happier those in God's grace are, relative to others.