Question

I want to submit a abstract, but one paragraph seems a lot of problem, can you fix it, or tell me what's the problem. Maybe some errors of grammar . " I will attempt to analyze the risk assessment cases of contemporary society, folk knowledge and expert knowledge must still be combined in a discussion on the consensus, so that a particular law is not only to persuade the people around the words of mouth, but around the feeling of heart. In other words, the knowledge of experts must be translated into the language of ordinary people, in order to contribute to obtain a consensus." Thanks

Answer 1

Period after "society"; capital 'F' on "folk"; define "risk assessment cases" , an example might help; you might want to specify the problem that you are attempting to address, example, "...cases, because......"

Your topic is something away from my own experiences.

Answer 2

After Folk knowledge add a comma. Add a period after expert knowledge, and then continue with: [It] must still be combined in a discussion (...). Also where it says " ,so that " take out the word 'that'. Lastly, add a comma between the word 'to' and the word 'contribute', so it will read smoothly.

Answer 3

Hope what I said makes sense. :) If you need a clarification just message me.