Question

can someone fix my introduction if I have any errors. you could change the sentence if you want to. "If I had to learn a lesson before dying, my lesson would be that I have to learn how to have self-confidence in myself. Having confidence will help me to learn how to work with my peers and face all of my challenges. If I don't learn to have confidence I might not go far in life. Being confident says a lot about you as a person and it gives people an idea who you are as an individual. I believe having self-confidence is the key to open your doors and stepping out in the real world."

Answer 1

their is nothing wrong with the introduction. i think it sounds great. you don't need to change anything. but errors. i dnt know if im right or wrong but there is one thing. where you put Having confidence will help me to learn how to work with peers and face all of my challenges. you should put a coma instead of a period. and that's about it