hi can someone look at my sonnet in give me some help with it, its not finished and doesn't rime yet im am useing 10-15 syllabals and the format is a b a b c d c d e f e f g g

Things so small and so pretty pulls your eye to lots of colour
Protectors of death, and destruction, cleans the petals as they crawl
As it scatters along a petal it falls into a spiders trap
So sad yet so wrong as the beautiful bugger is lost in the sight
black dots on a dirty floor brings no appeal to the human eye
Annoying little pests as they scurry through their nest
Ants are scavengers with a desperate

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hi can someone look at my sonnet in give me some help with it, its not finished and doesn't rime yet im am useing 10-15 syllabals and the format is a b a b c d c d e f e f g g

Things so small and so pretty pulls your eye to lots of colour
Protectors of death, and destruction, cleans the petals as they crawl 
As it scatters along a petal it falls into a spiders trap 
So sad yet so wrong as the beautiful bugger is lost in the sight 
black dots on a dirty floor brings no appeal to the human eye 
Annoying little pests as they scurry through their nest
Ants are scavengers with a desperate

anonymous · Answer

and the first bit is about a ladybug

anonymous · Answer

I'm liking it.. all about interpretation. You should draw your sonnet together by expanding on how they interact and how they make human life significant. That always is a winner for most. Make sure you are very subtle though, leaving it open for interpretation. You're off to a good start but definitely have a little left to go. Keep going! :)