Question

help please

Answer 1

Write a short story about a main character who undergoes a change or learns something. If you feel your creativity is lacking, remember writing about what you know, your own personally experiences or those of your friends and family are easy to turn into an entertaining short story. Include the following elements in your short story:

A clear setting – the time and place of the story
A plot – series of events that builds to a dramatic climax
A narrator to tell the story
Effective descriptions using sensory details
Dialogue to develop the characters
Error-free grammar, including use of consistent verb tense

Answer 2

Tittle: "Why I Don't Party Any More!"
It all started about 1 year ago in Jacksonville. Me and my friends party all day and night every day for years. Some of the people i party with are in gangs. One day we had a party at Shae's house and Shae is a blood. At Shae's house everybody drinks alcohol and like to use drugs. I ran out of smokes so me and my homeboy Boby got money from about ten people at the party and walked to the store . On the way we ran in to some more people who had money for alcohol. When we got to the store. I got some five packs of cigarettes and Boby got six 12 packs of beer. It was hard to bring all that beer back to the house but we did. When we got back there was over a 100 people in side and out side of the house. Shae gave me and Boby a pack of smokes and let us split a 12 pack of beer for going to the store for him. Some how i ran into my friend Mike. Mike is a skin head nazi he was my best friend even though i was not wight. We talked for hours MIke had been my best friend for ten year and it been about one year sens i seen him last. But me and Boby had to go back to the store to get more beer for Shae. Me and Boby all ways go to the store together so i don't get robed or jumped. When we got back it was 1:00am and Shae and his roommate Budgy ate 30 zanax bars and about 10 bar can kill a normal person. Budgy is a blood.One time he stabed his own dad for five dollars and a bag of weed and that is not much to stab some one for. So me and Boby got the beer back to Bugsy and Shae and they looked like they have not went to sleep in days. Some little kid had a gun and he pulled it out to show it off. That kid was only 13 year old how did he get that gun? But i fond out that it was apart of Mike's gang. After i drank a shot with Mike and gave him a cigarette a fight broke out. It lasted for 30 minutes and when the fight was over Mike got in his truck. I was walking up when Budgy shuck is right hand and stab him in the left eye with a philips head screwdrivers. I thought he was dead but he yelled "i can't see i can't see!" So Shae stabed him too about 20 time in the back and in the back of his head and the little kid with the gun just stud there pointing the gun at every one. My little sister was there to so graved her hand and ran down the street. Time we got to the end of the block cops was every where. To day Shae and Budgy are in prison!

Answer 3

true story :(

Answer 4

It has everything Its suppose to have. O and fix the spelling and grammar lol. Its very dramatic

Answer 5

wich word

Answer 6

where is the grammar bad

Answer 7

Me and my friends party all day and night every day for years. Some of the people i party with are in gangs When we got to the store. I got some five packs of cigarettes and Boby got six 12 packs of beer. When we got back there was over a 100 people in side and out side of the house. Some how i ran into my friend Mike. Mike is a skin head nazi he was my best friend even though i was not wight.
Ok for starters go with My friends and I would party all day.... and so on. but instead i would combine that with how their in gangs like Some of my friends were in gangs and we would party all the time. Where it says when we got to the store, you dont need a period. You would say a 12 pack instead of packs. Then with saying Mike is a skin head nazi, just refer to him as a skin head and wight is spelled white(: you mainly have simple errors.