Hows this poem?

Every day I have to look into those brown eyes.
Eyes full of love.
They reason with me, showing me right from wrong.
As they guide me through my life, I realize the importance.
She loves me.

Question

Hows this poem? 



Every day I have to look into those brown eyes.
Eyes full of love. 
They reason with me, showing me right from wrong. 
As they guide me through my life, I realize the importance. 
She loves me.

lgbasallote · Answer

might be better if you say "Every day I loon into those brown eyes"

"I have to look" makes it sound as if you're forced to look

lgbasallote · Answer

that's "Everyday I look"* not loon

anonymous · Answer

Agreed with the earlier response. You can change "I have to look" with "I am drawn to" or "gaze at."