Question

CAN SOME1 HELP ME FINE TUNE THIS PAPER?? THX

Answer 1

Paper?

Answer 2

its only five paragraph

Answer 3

Read Aloud to Yourself used wrong words in certain places. :)

Answer 4

I tried that and I dont know where

Answer 5

first paragraph
I think that students***

Answer 6

Bullying to some students is having to fit in the crowd.

Answer 7

Mix up your paragraphs some of the sentences dont flow with the others.

Answer 8

mix up the sentences in the paragraphs i mean

Answer 9

what would be a good title

Answer 10

The Exploit Of Bullying

Answer 11

How about that?

Answer 12

That sounds good, thank you very much. Is there any other grammar errors from what you see? Thanks again

Answer 13

Np umm one sec

Answer 14

*Bullying can be a physical and metal issue. 1st paragraph
2nd paragraph
Bullies pick on students who do not fit in the crowd.
When the innocent student doesn't want to have any part, that is when the bullying begins.
Bullying can be a sort of verbal and physical harm.
Bullies dont care how you feel at all. 3rd paragraph
Fix fourth paragraph last sentence
Anything you talk about "back then" should be All In One paragraph by itself.

Answer 15

Thanks very much