Is this a good hook for a five paragraph essay?
The prompt says is in a five paragraph essay defend the idea that edmond dantes is a byronic hero.

hook: There are many things that make hero be different from a byronic hero who follows the rules for justice. A Byronic hero has to break some rules and have Byronic traits, that makes them a different type of hero that no one expects to see.

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Is this a good hook for a five paragraph essay?
The prompt says is in a five paragraph essay defend the idea that edmond dantes is a byronic hero.

hook: There are many things that make hero be different from a byronic hero who follows the rules for justice. A Byronic hero has to break some rules and have Byronic traits, that makes them a different type of hero that no one expects to see.

anonymous · Answer

How about, at the end, instead of; "A Byronic hero has to break some rules and have some Byronic traits, that makes them a different type of hero that no one expects to see." You put; "A Byronic hero has to break some rules to have some Byronic traits, that makes them a unique type of hero." It sounds less jumbled and rushed.

anonymous · Answer

It's not really a hook; it's more like you're explaining what you plan on writing about.  Some teachers appreciate that, some hate it.  It just depends on who's going to read it.

anonymous · Answer

Mysterious, morose, cunning, and rebellious are just a few of the many adjectives that one would use to describe Edmond Dantes, or a Byronic Hero.// Or you could start off the paragraph with a brief action-filled recollection of something that happened that proved Edmond Dantes to be a Byronic Hero.