Question

so i made up a poem and need opinions
peanut butter
goes good with jelly
and bread and my name is lelly

Answer 1

don't think ur teacher could ask for anymore.

Answer 2

@churrity wat do u think?

Answer 3

i would drop the and between jelly and bread substituting an extended pause. If you need to punctuate it use a semi colon. I think your cadence would be more on point this way but i may be reading it wrong

Answer 4

Peanut Butter.
Good with Jelly,
bread; (you know, | also)
my name is lelly

( | ) this represents different options. Teachers are suckers for syllable staggering in step

Answer 5

My opinion doesn't matter. I have nothing relevant to contribute to this discussion.

Answer 6

Hey Lelly,My name is Selly i like Peanut Butter and Jelly xD

Answer 7

It is an awkward poem because your wording structure is somewhat off. You need to work on the poem flow.