Question

Some more poems of mine

Answer 1

PROMISES
A promise
Once made, Disappears, Fades
It was nothing you believe
My life, as I perceive
I believed and waited
Many months, many years...
My heart grew cold
No feeling could it hold
Yet I waited
Just a game to you
You laughed at my pain
And soon you forgot
I've found you once again
I say with a smile
Do you know? What you've done?
Of course you wouldn’t
A smile from within
Cold and frozen
It's alright, that’s fine
Soon...you’ll remember
and then we can play again

Answer 2

Crimson.
Pieces of my broken self are scattered around my feet.
Crimson as the pieces of myself glitter as red diamonds.
For myself.
All of it.
For myself.
Self relation is hard to come by.

But I can only breathe each breath of life I receive. I cannot change the darkness of the past.
Or the uncharted future.
I’m left in a fork in the road uncertain to stay where I am.
Or move forward.
Instead,
I collect the broken glass.
Memories flicker across the reflection;
be good or bad.
I cannot tell.
I will not tell a soul.
All is uncharted.
All is sad.

Answer 3

WAY TO DEEP
Fell to deep,
Lost your feet.
Can't hold back,
Lost the track.
My life goes by,
undefined.
Pressures here,
I've lost my mind.
People hurt,
been threw worse.
It brakes,
and my blood turns into a lake.
No one cares,
it all seems fair.
Dead to all,
why do I even care?

Answer 4

WHERE WERE YOU
You were never there, I needed you.
You made me cry irrational tears.
You abandoned my mother , she gave the world to you.
Something is stopping me from calling you a stupid man.
You always told me to go easy on you, you were sick.
But that just became an excuse.
I was a good kid, truly I was.
I never ran away, even though I was tempted to.
I kept my grades up, I let you watch as I walked on the graduation stage.
I went against everything I stood for; because I thought you had a pure soul.
Why couldn't I see your selfishness?
You only cared about yourself, and my mother had to suffer because of that.
Our scars run too deep for you to try to fix.
Is it selfish for me to wish you away?
I hope not.
They say that I should love you unconditionally.
Because you are my father.
But that only goes so far.
The only thing connecting us is blood.
Only blood.
However that's not enough, for me to stay.
I'll say goodbye to you one day.
And when I do, don't follow me.
I only have so much to give you.
I won't call you father, any longer.
You don't deserve that title.
You don't live up to it.
So what do you want from me now?
My blood, my organs?
Fine, have it all.
But leave me the hell alone.

Answer 5

great poems...just put them to a beat and u have a great rap....idk if ur into that though

Answer 6

@FIRE_RAYNE_84 I am but i'm terrible at rap :s

Answer 7

lol

Answer 8

Ya :$ its kind of embarrassing

Answer 9

me and my brother love music especially rap music.

Answer 10

maybe i could give u some suggestions

Answer 11

Well thats good :) me and my brother use to sing extremely loud even though we sounded like dying ducks :> i miss doing that with him

Answer 12

What kind of suggestions?

Answer 13

what happend to him? if u don't mind me asking

Answer 14

but just suggestions about rapping

Answer 15

Around 6 years ago me and my brother went to mexico to visit some of our family and i needed to do soe buissness. I was in some bad things back then and thanks to my stupid descicisons he died.... I still blame myself for it but i cant do anything to change it soo ya

Answer 16

and sure i would love some suggestions for rapping :)

Answer 17

alright... 1st just go with the flow of the beat...don't think about what ur saying cuz the u will concentrate on the words and not the beat that ur rapping to. then just be calm about it because u will tense up

Answer 18

but oh my god i didnt even see the response about ur brother... im soooooooooo sorry dont blame yourself though u will see him again

Answer 19

Those are good tips thanks :)

Answer 20

And naw its ok......

Answer 21

Oh wow Q_Q