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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Can someone take a look at my poem to tell my if it is good: We are different snowflakes the same one will never be cast out twice. We are as different as numbers They are similar, But have different values. We are different projects They all have the same intention But they are each unique Being different is as important as being who you are Live for a different purpose Be a different snowflake

OpenStudy (anonymous):

that's really good

OpenStudy (beccaboo333):

It's pretty good, I like it ^_^

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I love it!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Very nice! I notice you use the word "different" many times throughout the poem. This highlights hoe each person/snowflake is different in each way you mention. But it also isn't as interesting for the "texture" of the poem as a more diverse vocabulary would. For example varied values would sound interesting and add an element of alliteration. Try using a thesaurus to find new words of a similar meaning to add contrast and texture in your descriptions.

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