Question

ADVICE PLEASE?
How can I write this sentence better?

Answer 1

Kids started going to school, men started going to work and in so many other ways was the renaissance different from the Middle Ages, moving more and more towards today's lifestyle, as opposed to the system of a central lord owning land, and a couple of serfs working on it.

Answer 2

The kids are going to school while the men went to work, and in compared to the world today everything is way more different in all aspects.

Answer 3

No, I am comparing the "middle ages" to the renaissance.

Answer 4

The Renaissance began in the late 14th century, right after the Middle ages, and continued into the 15th century. It was a time of enlightenment, and education. Kids started going to school, men started going to work and in so many other ways was the renaissance different from the Middle Ages, moving closer and closer towards today's lifestyle, as opposed to the system of a central lord owning land and a couple of serfs working on it.

Answer 5

this is the first 2 sentences of the essay.

Answer 6

Let me think for a moment

Answer 7

sure

Answer 8

Your beginning sentences are perfect!!!

Answer 9

Thank you. I did have somethings to correct, but not sure...

....as opposed to the system of a central lord owning land and a couple of serfs working on it.

No comma after land, I originally wrote with a comma.

Answer 10

But thank you!

Answer 11

Sure